Sunday, August 19, 2012

additional thoughts to the essay

  • what would you have written if you had more time?
  • what occurred to you after you left?
  • how did the interruption affect your thought process?


  • If i would've had more time to write the essay I would've organized it better. I feel like I just wrote a bunch of stuff in order in the first paragraph or so and then rambled on in the last paragraphs. Having to leave half way through the class period made me lose my thoughts and I forgot alot of what I was going to write when we returned to class. Before we left I was going to write all of my thoughts down on a piece of paper, but instead decided to just write because of the shortage of time.

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